I added a few more things to my cover. I included a competition in my magazine because I think if people think they could win something by reading the magazine, then they are more likely to buy it. I made the prize an iphone 4 because its the newest iphone out at the moment and alot of people cant afford one and by entering this competition, they could win one for free which makes it fair for everyone.

I quite like my music magazine cover. I know it will look alot better when it has an image on the front and I may change the background colour to a more plain one but considering this is just my draft, I like it and as my target audience is females from my age to 25ish, I think it's very good and I'd buy it!